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Stay the breeze
and freeze the mist;
don't let it fade away.

Keep the days
in place, persist;
in memory, let me stay.
We're all afraid of being forgotten. But sooner or later, we are all fated to fade from sight and mind.
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shirls-art Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
its lovley and sad but true
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
Thank you for commenting!
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shirls-art Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
your very welcome
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Yinyanged Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ah, sad but true.
The poem is as short as our existance.
Brilliant work, as per usual.
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
Thank you.
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful! :D
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
Thank you!
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
np
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aldwarke Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
Nice one!
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
Thank you! Did it evoke any thoughts in you?
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aldwarke Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
Quite a few, some pleasant.
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
And some unpleasant?
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aldwarke Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
Well, regretful.
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
Yeah, this was a poem spawned from sadfeels.
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aldwarke Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
I suppose we all look back on life and think of occasions when we could have acted better to somebody. But you can't undo just one thread in life, can you?
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Death-By-Grunge Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
I guess, yeah. Not what I was going for, but I'm glad you got a different view of it.
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breamgappy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
very short and true!!!
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